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Thanks, Hal for sharing your story! From evil, goodness spreads across the globe. A couple of years ago, I did get scammed too. But, no music or poems came out of this experience. 1 scam is enough for a lifetime! Well here's for beautiful music & your love, Hal!

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I got hit by this scam too! Though I didn't get as far as writing a song. Who knows how many songs for non-existent children are now out there in the universe? It's kind of a sweet thought, I guess, but also a weird one, and sort of ghostly.

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And also, the song is amazing! So sweet and graceful.

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Seriously?! You got hit by the same scam?! Dang. Does anybody actually send the $2700?!

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What a crazy story! It makes this song all the more unique.

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Wow, unreal what people do. So sorry about the scam, Hall, though grateful you got to play around with the chord progressions, envision a loving family, AND produce this beautiful, sweet, touching song!! Oh, and have an interesting, documented story here, too!! Thanks for sharing!

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This is the weirdest scam I've ever heard of. Still amazes me that someone thought that would be a fun and fruitful way to get $2700. But the song is so utterly delightful and makes me cry. Maybe you wrote it for my inner 4-year-old. Even though Flash wasn't my hero and I don't think I even knew what soccer was when I w as 4, it works. It's for all our inner 4-year-olds.

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P.S. In case you missed it, my name is Jo(e)

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It is so light and playful and full of joy! It is completely 4 🎉, and I completely enjoyed it. Going in for a second listen right now. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.

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Oooh I love this!! What a wonderful song!

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Wow , Hal . What a fabulous song written with so much care and love . I am so sorry that it was a scam and that the song didn’t get used as it should have . Let’s hope there is a little Jo , turning 4 sometime , who will get this beautiful song one day, and be celebrated .

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This makes me so sad to read! And the song 🎵 ... touching in an uplifting way. Maybe it's for all our inner children, especially those of us who wished we had such a loving upbringing.

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Whadya expect: a Real Madrid fan 🤮😡🤬🤮!! (Sorry, couldn’t help myself over here in Barça land). This made me so sad for you and your beautiful, trusting heart. But since we’re all in this together, we all got to hear your sweet tribute. ♥️

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Appreciated this post....good warning! I was right there with you while reading and thinking this is the sweetest idea for a birthday gift....then, WHAM! What a maddening experience. Wow, the yuck of humanity can really be nauseating. However, your song turned out FANTASTIC and brought joy to your loyal listeners. Thank you for that. Blessings to you, Hal. ~Wendy💜

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Good job Hal. Shame on scammers.

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People are odd. I never understood why people do things like this. But what great stuff came from it. Love the lyrics.

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What an insane scam….. they got a song out of it… but were they trying to get you to cash a bogus check and send them the balance before their check bounced. It’s insane!

I LOVE your adorable song

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